by LucysFox
Waiting on the next phase....dont wait so long to get it out. I'm dying to see more.
please continue. I would like to see a further development of the relationship. Is it possible of a home only relationship?
This was quite well written with good detail (but not too much) of the main character's thoughts and feelings. I'm really interested to see what "improvements" Reece has planned - hopefully helping Sam to put some meat on his bones and fill out his hips, booty and thighs. And perhaps a brazilian butt lift after that?
This was hot!
A good start on a great story that I hope will be long and steamy.
I hope you wont overdo the transformation and do it quickly like every other author does it, make it more realistic and changing at a slower pace and you will make it even more enjoyable.
5 Stars easy!
Your play on Sam and his thoughts of being in denial are great to read, I kept expecting him to explode into full passion and acceptance of Reece as his lover.
This was so amazing! Please tell me you are planning on writing more.
Love how this story went, how Sam's Boss convinced Sam into dressing as a little school girl in order to get Sam to give him a blow job. After the the sexual act was over Sam's Boss tricked him into believing Sam was clear to progress with not having to worry about what Sam had just done with his Boss only to find his Boss had filmed every decadent moment. What would be a neet thing to put into the next chapter if you write one would be to keep Sam having to keep having to end up in his Boss' office for what ever reason and having his Boss to continue offering Sam a bottled water because it's laced with female hormones this way Sam can't figure out what is happening to his body and becomes his Bosses girlfriend .
Great first chapter, I like the writing. I really hope it continues!
This was great! I liked the back and forth of wavering in Sam and how sweet Reece would be but also dominant.
I like this and seems to have much potential
Please continue with this, I would love to see Sam accepting herself
I love this, and honestly, I would love to see how the story goes on, I like both characters
I thought I had read this story before but I guess I was wrong because there should have been more to this story. The version I remember the Boss was blackmailing Sam with the videos from his office and with the bottle of water that was offered to Sam was laced with hormones and every time he had entered into the Bosses office he was encouraged to have a bottle of water and eventually Sam was unconsolable because he couldn't understand why his body was transforming to make him look even more as a girl.
This is very hot she may buck about it at first but she will make a beautiful girl
I think once Sam full dressing like a girl 24/7 she will still take the hormones to stop the picks of her sucking his cock from being seen
I really enjoyed this, looking forward to where the story goes from here.
Wish there was more to this story. Made a wet spot in my pink panties. :)
Wow, you really tapped into all those emotions and what Sam was thinking and going through. Very well written! Definitely one of my favorites.
I just re-read this after a few years. Very well written, and oddly sweet for a non consent/reluctance type story. Please keep writing!