All Comments on 'Unqualifiedly Datable Ch. 02'

Very good story! I have to agree with Tejas1821, though. Sentence structure, grammar and spelling need a little work.

I'll sure be looking forward to more, though!

Hot story, but dude, work on your grammar, sentence structure and spelling as the poor writing is very distracting. You have a hot story going--don't take away from it.

How can Dinkyboots criticize ANYone's spelling? Dinkyboots is illiterate!

your spellinmg is off. please inprove it.? i sick of trying to figuire out what your trying to say.?

"When I walked out of the bathroom of my apartment with a towel around my waist I thought I was fine. I felt something jerk at my hips and then my towel was gone."

This must be the one most hilarious vision I ever had in my head :D

I want more soon please

I just love this story.This makes me feel that in real life there is someone for all of us.I know that there will be some hard time for my men to over come,but please see to it that they always stand together and that Danny is kept within their family and get someone to love too.As you may see i don't want much..............thank-you for making me feel good

This story is really good. i love the characters and the storyline! im looking forward to where you take this story! i love danny the most he is hilarious!

Wow!! Please keep this story going!! I love your characters!! I can't wait to see where these two go....

please write more to this and please hurry

I really hope you post soon! I am loving this story!!!!! I really hope Jay will come out and be with Chris. Seriously, I dont know how long I can wait for the next chapter. Loving you. x

Please post quickly. I can't wait for more. Don't make it too hard on the guys. They can make each other very happy. Please keep writing.

So I guess now we'll be finding out if Jason is able to go the distance with Chris or if he's just going for speed. Because the way he's blown his load right off the starting blocks sure doesn't bode well for a "distance" relationship... I want the best for these guys - I'm as big a sucker for a happy ending as the next hag, honest - but damn. As in wham bam damn. Does he even know Chris's middle name? I'd love to see him openly date Chris and beat the shit out of the first hockey player who taunts him over it. But I have a bad, bad feeling that this is all about speed, baby, and Jason just moved way, way too fast... Guess it's all about the drama, huh?

can't wait to see what happens next!

Why do I think that spells trouble for them in the future? But they'll have so much fun making up! Keep this going!

good work. keep 'em coming (no pun intended)!