All Comments on 'Untapped Resource Ch. 01'

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writerjabwriterjab11 months ago

You need an editor. Word usage was abysmal

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey11 months ago

5 Stars. Very hot, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Super hot when it comes from mom's point of view. Please write this as a mom son story. Don't add anyone into this. Mom's reluctance gives super hot to the story

muskyboymuskyboy11 months ago

Get an editor. Not an incest story, not even a story really. Maybe a masturbation story at best. Finish the story before you submit it next time. Good idea, not great execution.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The husband is going to get a big surprises when he get home and she announce that she is pregnant!

MorbidromanticMorbidromantic11 months ago

Does it gonna be another one of numerous stories in which father and son fuck the females in the family? I'd love to be wrong but I'm afraid it will be the case.

seittitgibseittitgib11 months ago

Great start, looking forward to the rest!

Also Musky what are you on about? Literally titled Ch.01.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Without even acknowledging their "presents"???

C'mon, this is terrible.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Liked it but no incest 4 stars

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I am a divorced, single white male. One of the side effects of my painful divorce, followed by my new fear of relationships, was that with the less sex that I was having, the more my imagination was running amuck. Inspired by events taken place throughout my life, my imaginat...

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