All Comments on 'Untitled Diary Ch. 01'

nice story i dont really like the whole female domination thing but great elaboration and detail giving every character their own personality honesty if you did some type of story in a catagory i liked more you would be an even better writer for me personal but with this story its still great and continue writing

I'm loving this so far! I think you've done a great job with the scenario: it's believable (well, as believable as these things get, anyway!), with a lot of engaging details that really drew me into our unnamed protagonist's "plight". It's fun to speculate about what's really going on, with hints like the blonde doctor's "potential customers".

I also think the addition of the "fan-favourite brunette" is a great touch and really gives us readers something to root for - or it gives us strong expectations for you to dash to smithereens, depending on how you want to play it. Anway, I'm definitely looking forward to the next instalment, and finding out a little bit more about this curious but arousing situation!

Finally, I'm not sure if you're interested in having typos pointed out, but I noticed one:

"she leaned over and unlocking the penis cover from my belt."

I would like to know when to expect the next part!

Great story, I loved all of it. I really hope you are working on Chapter 2.

I love your story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Nice big fun imagination, spirit of adventurousness, and not forgetting the hottness, nicely done, fella ...

Nice story, waiting for the second part

I have read, and reread this story over and over. Next installment please. ASAP.

Best Story ive read.

Pls continue.

Would love to see more chapters of this sotry.

Great story. I'd like to read part two, although I guess I should not hold my breath

Please make more