All Comments on 'Untouchable Ch. 02'

Hope to read more sooner rather than later!

....setting up the story from both perspectives as Kim obviously doesn't know just how animalistic Henry can be....yet. 4+*

I like it so far, having a little trouble keeping up with your tenses (past/present), so maybe an editor can help with that. One suggestion, maybe make the chapters with the different POV into a .5 instead of the next number. I think that might help readers understand that they're not getting a whole new chapter, but a different POV of the original. For example, this chapter would have been 1.5 instead of 2. Nonetheless, I hope you continue writing! I'm intrigued!

This story has some interesting twists and turns. I like the fact that in continuation second chapter we find out that he's a wolf. That brings a whole nother concept to this story it's good so far I look forward to more chapters.