All Comments on 'Untouched Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loving it!

Keep up the momentum! I'm enjoying this story so far :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
lol

fiona hasn't a clue that sutok is going to make her his mate in every way! i am really enjoying this story.

MyDoubleSidedLifeMyDoubleSidedLifeover 5 years ago
Amazing

So good, I can’t wait to read the rest!!!!

MyaHunterMyaHunterover 5 years ago
What's up with the short update?

What a tease! It was great none the less

LitLover469LitLover469over 5 years ago
Sutok

I kind of think I have a crush on Sutok. lol. Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Longer Chapters, Please!!

I'm immersed in the story, but now I have to wait for another tidbit. :/ Keep it coming. This is such a unique story.

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 5 years ago
Sutok and Fee

A match made in the Jungle!

Did I laugh when he picked her up and swung from tree to tree? Heck Yes!

Am I going to continue to laugh at their interactions? Heck Yeah!

Do I think the chapters need to be longer? HELL YEAH!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great Writing!

Really loving your story and your writing is exquisite! The chapters are really short though, would it be possible to make them as longer?

Can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Update Please

I’ve been waiting so long for part three 😩 please update

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!

Please update, love this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Omgggg

Please please update!! I’m am so excited to read the next part!!

Alsamae94Alsamae94almost 5 years ago
Please continue

Will you please find time in your busy schedule to do the next chapter I really love the way you started this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Come on already!

I've been waiting MONTHS for an update come oooonnnn! I'm horny slut who needs IR fantasy fix! This brings back memories of the first time I watched Tarzan as a little girl he sent me into a pillow humping frenzy. But this, this right here I all that and more! I NEED more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
PLEASE UPDATE

Just. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great so far

Loving the buildup of the story so far. Patiently waiting for an update

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Part 3!

Good so far! Please update the story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
So far so wet

Lovely rendition. Looking forward to the resoulutuon

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please update

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please this story is so good

PrettyGPrettyGabout 3 years ago
Are you gonna finish this story?

Omg where is the rest of this story?!? It’s so good so far, don’t leave every one hanging. Update ASAP! Unless your story is on another platform... In that case post a link so we can get to the rest.

6King6Kingover 2 years ago

It's possible "life" happened and someone else will have to resume this story. * * * * *

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyabout 2 years ago

How dare you be this good at writing and leave us hanging! Lol I hope you're well ❤️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please return to this story. Please!

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