by TwistedDreamer58
Or a idiotic troll? If that gets 2 stars, it will be a disgrace.
Our introduction to your imagination, talent and skill was almost perfect. Please be sure to include branding, public flagellation and female genital mutilation in your next story.
And post it somewhere else.
Thanks!
Bordering on stupid! Although I had a flight from Baltimore ,BWI, some years ago before it was renamed for Thurgood Marshall to London, UK which although not as blatant was certainly as entertaining for me. I met a woman in Bermuda who worked at BWI and disembarked there as the route at that time was BDA-BWI-LHR. One of the flight attendants, noticing the departed passenger and that we were both on passes(whom,I found out, she knew) engaged me in conversation and made the last leg of my flight a true pleasure, which we continued in London for a few days before I had to resume my business meetings. Although I saw her a number of times after that at the airport in Bermuda we were never able to rekindle any kind of relationship due to her schedule and our other relationships. 3*** for the originality.
A million ways you could go with this. Look forward to reading some of them.
What is going on here on Literotica? Have we been invaded by a bunch of horny incels?!!?
If you're going to write Fetish/BDSM/Non-con stories at least do the readers the courtesy of posting this garbage in the correct category. This was simply awful.
No stars as even giving this garbage one star would be an insult to the star.
I get the penchant for dystopian fiction these days, but this is a bit extreme.
You might have been able to write a reasonable framework that could explain the events enough to make the plotline make sense, but unfortunately, it wasn't here.
So... it just seemed to be stream of consciousness after a bad acid trip.
Please don’t write anything else.
This just doesn't make a lot of sense. What does it have to do with loving wives?
And yeah, it's not LW. It's a bizarre hybrid of slavery\bdsm\non con where the writers, a few addled one_shots, can't decide whether the women are prostitute property of their owners or free to be raped by any man who wants them.
You had one job: write a jerk off story about cheating wives and instead you gave us this piece of shit? I wouldn’t use this to wipe my ass.
That was some weird unexpected shit. Felt like I was watching The Stepford Wives. Thanks.
Definitely should have been in Sci-Fi & Fantasy - yes, most LW stories rarely make much sense, but never to such a degree.
As many has already said, it was unexpected alright... 'just do not know if that makes it any good.
Not something I will ever re-read, though... which pretty much says it all.
Needed some introduction as to how we got to this weird alternative universe.