All Comments on 'Uptight young colleague - Pt. 01'

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bluecatz123 9 months ago

Awesome story, I really enjoy the slow buildup and tension. I hope you continue with subsequent chapters!

Anonymous8 months ago

Good premise.

Needed to slow down the sex.

Needed more reticence regarding the progression of the sex.

Needed dialog about what she imagined/envisioned while she masturbated.

Needed him getting her to watch some porn together with him -- assuming she'd never watched porn before.

Needed some indication of her level of sexual experience/s. Was she a virgin? How far had she gone before.

Three stars.

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Self-confessed, middle aged "perv", obsessed with all matters sexual and sensual. I will be writing a variety of stories, across a number of different categories. None of them are true. But all have some basis in reality. However small that may be. All will have been triggere...

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