All Comments on 'Vacation From Hell Ch. 06'

It seems like there is a good story in here trying to get out.

This might be the biggest mass exodus of readers I have ever seem with each new chapter. Maybe you should listen to the people who comment on your stories. Most people like readers to enjoy what they are writing. I'm not sure this author does!?!?

In content and lack of writing style

Down the tubes, and near the bottom. This is terrible.

hey wimp blow your brains out