All Comments on 'Vacation Fun'

Nice story. If I have to be critical then I would suggest a longer build up and a much longer story. Keep them coming!

No complaints about your writing style and technical aspects. Unfortunately sex in hot tub stories are a dime a dozen and yours was as basic as they come. I think before even starting such a story you need to have something in mind that will make it stand out from the crowd.

Some people think it's sooo easy to write a story, and it pisses me off that they(meaning some so called expert) think to criticize instead of compliment.

So I'm Complimenting you for your " Dime a dozen hot tub story"... Please write more...

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