All Comments on 'Vacation Surprise'

What else ?

swing?

where are the other women?

swinging is two way,

this was cuckolding, one way

wife wanted to show hubby that he is tiny and of no merit; that is again cuckolding

there was no swinging here

What is missing: 1st - What the wife felt after finding out about the set up? 2nd - This wasn't a fair swinging...The widow took charge of the group and fucked the other wives for free, not taking a woman in the group. 3rd - What this husband wanted was swinging or just be a wimp and cuckold? And so on...So this is a lot of missing details...1*

Is that all you got?

The story could have been hotter if you'd developed the husband and wife more. As is, it's just a mechanical description. How did the wife overcome her reluctance? Did the husband have any regrets? Did the wife take satisfaction from cuckolding her husband to pay his debts? I think you could have made this a lot better.

An unembellished telling of a familiar story

written in such a mater of fact style I had to stop wanking, slap myself and register a 1..................

This isn't a loving wife story, but a truly fucked up husband story. Give me some stars for reading this shit.