All Comments on 'Vacation to Heaven'

by GladiusEtScutum

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice short story

Young guys can have a lot of fun. The first step is most difficult after that benefits are great

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Thank You

Please continue writing...You have a fresh perspective...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Disgusting and unrealistic

What kind of idiot pours milk over a bowl of cereal before it's ready to be eaten? WTF.

Sex was hot though, keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

really got me hot!!!

i'd like to know more of it

happyguy36happyguy36almost 8 years ago
sex at its best

Young, horny, virile, love sucking and fucking. Whats not to like.one minor comment. The introduction of David to the fucking was kind of awkward.

great story though. Wish I were one of the three

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You wrote a great story for your first story.

Thank you for sharing a very hot story about young mm sex. I wish I had been able to have such a hot time with some of the guys. The best time I ever had was when a friend I knew and I pulled our cock's out and jacked off in living room.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

More stories please

totheMax2829totheMax2829about 6 years ago
Two Thumbs Up! 👍👍

Great story I loved it 😊 Please do more!

ibjtjonesibjtjonesalmost 6 years ago
keep it going

great story, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story

I wish I had an opportunity like this when I was young ....who I am kidding? I would love this this now and I’m an old man!!! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Cum swapping

The story structure needs some work, but I love the descriptions of swapping cum. It is rare to find so much cum swapping in a short story, so this was a real treat for a cum pig like me.

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