All Comments on 'Vacation with My Aunt Pt. 01'

i was into it all the way, up until the "fucking slut, fucking piece of shit" line...that just ruined it and it felt unnatural

That was hot and exciting. Bet she deliberately "forgot" to book her room and made sure that nephew's was available. This was planned on her end.

5/5

Really hot! Pretty much perfect except for the "you fucking piece of shit." comment. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, keep'em coming

Give that sexy 21nyear old nephew a bit of sexy chest hair, and when Aunt Holly's tits are dragged across his manly chest, the hair will stimulate her boobs and vice versa. They make a sexy pair!

So I presume next chapter it will be, "but there's nothing wrong with just seeing if my nephew's giant cock will fit in my pussy."

But maybe just a little too predictable.

Definitely a blown 5*

You did ruin a perfectly, fantastic story. What’s with the change. “Slut” maybe but “you fucking piece of shit”, where did that come from.

I agree with Tongue-Stud that calling her a slut and piece of shit was totally out of place and it ruined an otherwise good story.

Please have so much more!

I see a few people asking for more, I have up to Part 5 submitted (I personally think they are at least as good as Part 1) and I have Parts 6 & 7 in my head, so stay tuned.

And I do agree with what some people said, about part of the end feeling unnatural. Honestly I wish I took more time with the blowjob, it went from sensual to facefuck too fast

Completely turned off by the language at the end.

i loved the slut part and for those who didn’t maybe the story isn’t for you

Don't let the haters bring you down, some women enjoy that, and if its her kink maybe the hook up is even more meant to be, extreme, and taboo.

It's treating her poorly outside the bedroom that would be an issue.

"undue my bra"

FAIL

zipzero,

This is your story. The speed that things occur in are yours and yours alone.

If James wants to throat fuck his Aunt the first time in. That's just fine!

Many a love making opportunities, have turned quickly into raw animal fucking.

Lust is an incredible element!

Remember Holly is no fair maiden here.

She came out of that bathroom dressed to impress.

No flannel bathrobes and Granny panties here.

Besides she the newest, Queen of Loopholes.

Can't fuck, but sure can explore each other.

She can't suck it, but she can test to see if it fits in her mouth. lol!

Keep em coming!

To those offended by zipzero writings? Write your own story. Nobody will read it!

Pretty hot

Hope you got your aunt and her daughter knocked up my aunt I went to nudist resort every woman signed contract with resort saying guy not reponsible if they get knocked up birth control wasn't allowed I knocked up my aunt before any other guy could

Seriously, you call her a fucking piece of shit? It was erotic and taboo and then becomes abusive? Lame.

Took my aunt RACHEAL on vacation to nudist resort both had to leave clothes at front desk given ticket for clothes suit caseswe also signed somes papersone I sgned could fuck any single or married woman if they got knocked up me it was their problem my signed hers no birth control allowed as many guys to fuck her she was responsible for her pregnancy got to are room one queen size bed pushed her on bed rammed my cock up her cunt she screamed while I fucked until she felt my sperm being unloaded in her cunt saying I put my kid in you pulled out said lets go started walking she leaked out guys saw it 6 of them grabbed her gangbaned her double penetration in her cunt.then gave her triple penetration in her cunt yelled and screamed fucking her hard then 3 unloaded in her pulled out of her got up walked away told her looks like your going to be getting fucked every day while we are here one day found her in are room getting fucked gangbanged by 12 black guys she was mostly double penetrated by largest cocks mouth ass and cunt once finished after fucking her straight for 4 hrs said I think we put black kid in her