All Comments on 'Vale Ch. 01: Happy Birthday'

Very cute and funny. I can’t wait to see what you build onto this one. Great job as usual.

(Ch. 2 of 6 tomorrow. Should release every 2-3 days.)

Very twisty-turny story this. A constant surprise to write.

Not sure I know how to compliment you for this AlinaX, reading Vale is like wrestling a greasy pig (not that I have btw), just getting to grips with it, and… pow! it turns 90° hard left - or up/down etc and I’m on my butt again, sounds like it was a riot to write fwiw! ;-) 5*

It's funny because it was never the intention to make the story into a well lubricated swine. I was just trying to embrace tropes without making the characters completely absurd and one-dimensional.

Well, the premise damn sure has my attention.

Love it. Hope he has Very rough sex with Carls mom and then fucks Carl as well. But then, Bisex and BDSM are my favorite things to write about and not everyone is into that. Cant wait to read the next chapter!

I hope you're not too disappointed...

Liked it very much waiting on him to get Carl back 4 stars