All Comments on 'Valentines Blizzard'

Good premise.

But each sex scene was much too fast. Not nearly enough teasing/edging.

Needed many more details.

And you wrote: "...this would be the later." You meant LATTER, not LATER.

Four stars.

great story, would have loved to se your wife doing a sexy striptease for you

@anonymous..

thank you for your feed back. great catch on use of later/latter can't tell you how many times I missed that..

I was very torn between adding more details to the sex scenes, or reducing the number of sex scenes. I wanted to keep the story at about 2 pages and missed that. it is a tough balance, appreciate the feed back and will keep in in mind for future stories.

Just fantastic, great build up to nice final.

Loved the build up and the romantic tension between the two. Thank you for the story.