All Comments on 'Valentine's Day Present'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
willie

WOW!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

To improve this story not one thing it was great.

Can't wait for Ch 2 where they go on to get married cause she was with child after there first sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
loved it

It's nice when a virgin girl has a little pain when her cherry is popped - thanx

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
improvement not nessescary(spelling mistake?

i loved your story.no improvment needed

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