All Comments on 'Valentines for Suzie'

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SimonDoomSimonDoomover 4 years ago

Well done, Mr. EB. Glad to see Suzie's getting such good care and attention.

BelleCanzutoBelleCanzutoover 4 years ago

Nicely done, sirrah. I have wondered where your pervvy mind was going, messing about with Simon's sister, but you handled that well. Lovely, and not quite what I'd imagined from your hints in the AH. A pleasant surprise.

tnnkgrrltnnkgrrlover 4 years ago
Clever

Loved the TOMMY reference.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Cute Read***

With some rearranging of some words and phrases I think this could have been a romantic poem!! (just a thought?) Thanks for sharing.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 4 years ago
Excellent

A little gem.

AG31AG312 months ago

Evocative, as always. Thanks!

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.