All Comments on 'Valentine's Ink Blot Test'

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dauberdauberabout 6 years ago
Good story

I liked this story. It demonstrates your ability to convey those mixed up feelings of our twenties I can easily relate to. Thank you.

jmcharl1jmcharl1about 6 years ago
I enjoyed the flashback

Characters were real, conversation wasn’t wooden. I liked the was you transitioned from a problem in a relationship to a past experience, and then used that to lead into a potential for romantic resolution.

I would have liked this a little longer once back in the present but maybe that’s for another story. . . Over all a 4.5 *.

Look forward to reading more from you, and thank you for the story 🙂

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