All Comments on 'Valentines Remembrance'

What a sweet, tender and wondeful fairy tale :-) I thought you did well with the setup. You certainly satisfied this Romantic. Will hope you send in more tales beyond these first two.

There is one thing that messed up the meaning of several sentences. In almost all cases, when the narration is addressing a person, the person's name is set off from the rest of the sentence with commas. For example: "What Anna?" is perhaps asking the question is it Anna #1 or Anna #2? That sentence should read, "What, Anna?" Same is true with, "God Anna..." The God's name is not Anna. It should read, "God, Anna, ...." There were many more instances in this story.

A sweet story that says "yes, you can go back". A simple fantasy that comes true, I like it.

Luv it !

How nyce too reed a byutiful storee, wel tiold and ritten Korrektly. That seem to be a rarity these days. BRAVO!!!