by xxlarge
I thought it was a pretty decent story. It's plot was pretty simple, but sometimes they are the best. I'd like to see more from this author.I'd have prefered that the sex were more detailed and longer. I'd also of liked it better if the husband were less willing. Maybe he had gotten called away or passed the black men in the hall and came back to see his wife getting seduced, but that's my taste.Stormbringer
Keep it up! Like your writing style. A few more details about the sex would have been great (e.i.she let out a groan as he sunk his cock in her ass). Looking forward for your next tale with Val!
If all you dumb Asses don't like this type of story... gee, don't read it you dumb hillbillies!!! The story was hot and and is what alot of white guys fantasize about. IF you don't than take your little wienies and go back to your barnyard animals.