All Comments on 'Valerie Song: Drama Bomb Part 08'

I'm not sure if this is trying to be a comedy or its the writing style but the whole series is written in such a way that is just.. disingenuous? There's planted *cameos* and other weird things that just don't make sense. The suspension of disbelief is gone, and yes, while I know this is not a site that promotes realism and 100% flawless editing but it feels very low effort, like someone did a creative writing get exercise to just keep writing what was on their brain and never stopping, to just write everything down.

I just want to say I loved the story mate, there isn't a whole lot of well written hyper futa stuff out there and this is hot and hilarious. Can't wait to see how things wrap up.

hey, i greatly appreciate your story and especially the chapters focused on growth, keep them coming

but a little gripe at last: maybe u wonna dial down on the actual growth (25 feet is extreme, 4-5 feet max would easily be enough) and maybe slow down some more (especially the milf grew in like 3 sentences to 25 feet)

as i said, a very good read and easily one of my favourites on this site, keep it coming

kudos

Can someone please illustrate this series! At least a drawing of Val right before she's about to erupt would be the hottest picture EVER!!