by ava23
These have been very hot so far. You've done so much without spelling it all out (What does it mean to be a vampire? For him to spend the night? To bite her? To cum in her?). The mystery is delicious and very sensual. I would be very excited to see more.
I would love to see more! How is Mary different what makes her so special to Devon that he doesn't want to leave her. I would like to see more romance in the next chapter although the sex is great too!