All Comments on 'Vampire Of Gothic Dreams: Begainings'

You so need to learn how to spell!!!! You mispelled the TITLE!!!! Go find one of the editors that are FREE to use and then fix your mistakes! I spent more time proofreading than actually reading the story!

i think it was a good storyline but you could improve it alot

Fair start but you could do better,try slowing down the sex parts I felt you were all over the place

the grammer mistakes and misspelled words take away from your writing