All Comments on 'Vampire Quest Ch. 02'

You never never cut your throat NEAR the jugular lesbian vampire or not.Whats wrong with tits as the original Dracula sought out a vein in the breast.

I WANT MORE !! I luv this story. PLEASE don't stop.

there has to be more.. im just blow away by the characters.. really loved it.

More! excellent!

has their own favorite spot from which to draw nourishment. I prefer the inside of the thigh just below the pussy. That way I only have to turn my head slightly to feast on the other type of "food". What can I say? I love pussy.

I love the story. I think Rhiannon came to term to her past life & her mother Alina is actually the twin sister of Tanya, her previous life

this is a totally amazing story with great plot and character depth as well as great writing. i applaud you. please continue... i really dint want it to end and i need to know what happen next!!!

Awesome story!!!

Great story!!

It's fluffy, romantic, a little sad, but oh so sweet!

I look forward to more chapters.

you cant end it like that i need to know what happens with natasha and rhiannon please you have to come out with a chapt 3 please dont leave me hanging

What happens next :)

All your other readers seem to like this story very much but sadly I don't. It is very poorly constructed, there are many grammatical errors and much of the dialogue is stilted and unnatural. If you want to be a writer, then you have a great deal of work to do. Writing is a craft as much as, say, carpentry or needlework, and crafts have to be learned and perfected. I'm sorry, Chick88, but you have a lot to learn and a long way to go.