All Comments on 'Vanessa, The New Girl'

The end?? No way. I want an eight part adventure with these characters take me on an arc! For real, just great stuff.

The end? Oh I hope not. I think this has many miles on it. Do continue. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Thank you!!! Thank you!!! You've captured each character perfectly. Please don't let this be the end!

Vanessa and her daughter make a nice pair to be had by Stacie who humiliates Vanessa in showing off her slutingess in front of her reddened faced daughter.

I will add one more who wants to see more here. I thought he might have take care of Megan a few more times to prove herself as a submissive for Stacie. Kind of hoping she would be on the bottom of the totem pole for a bit, but you did such a great job that none of that mattered,

Pappasleaze!

More, please! Loving this story. Can't wait to the rest of the story.

Great story, never got tired of the escapades that Stacey and Vanessa were encountered in. Loved the Playroom, as well as the toys that Stacey shared with her sluts.

Looking forward to hearing more about these ladies and their boss. Please continue!

Oh loved this story! Stacie great character & great character dynamic. Hopefully they'll be chapter 2?

Love this outstanding 5 Star story about consenting adults doing what they want as their sexual adventures. Great story telling and great characters and fun adults choices we all get to make. Great drama. Love it. So keep the fun going. I enjoy it. I do often wonder why if a person does not like the story they keep reading then complaint that they kept going. If the story is not to my taste I close it o need to comment on it or complain I just move on to one I like. Cheers.

Omg, I hope this isn't the end! I loved this story, Stacie's control over Vanessa from the very beginning was such a big turn on for me, and I'm a guy! 5 stars just doesn't seem to be enough for this fantastic story, but since that is the highest I can go, I easily gave it 5 stars!!

Really enjoyed this story - very erotic and well written. Would love to read more like this from you.

No, no! Do not let this be the end. Good writing with only a couple of identity switches. I like this very much.

Helluva story! Really, really hope it'll keep going.

loved it but what about the husband finding out and getting revenge on Stacie

Another story where there is absolutely no reluctance or non-consent element and , again, the main character is acting, beyond naive, dumb and , frankly, slow witted and very willing to stray.