All Comments on 'Vanessa's Dissonance Ch. 21'

It is difficult to find a story line that progresses so naturally and builds up - from something i see as realistic until i am reading and realize “wait, this hasn’t been realistic for awhile despite how hot it is!” And i am so glad that you brought the story to a conclusion, and a place where we can envision what the main character’s life will likely be in the future. Thank you for your commitment!

Really long story and really really nasty! with so much details and descriptions. If you really like humiliation this one is definitely one of the best! I like the plot was heading to a strip club ho and then to a street whore, but it is really nasty all the way long.

the story started out great but seemed to lose it's way. it was a good story though . could have had a better ending. i do like reading tour stories,this one just had a flat ending. will continue to read all of your stories. thank you for your writing and keep it up.

I read the story.

Started off well and went down hill, unbelievable.

Too unbelievable and whacked out.

Grammar errors didn't help.

And yes I know it's fictional but some of treatment put on the main character. Would put a person in the hospital.

I love this story!

I hope you will give us more of your graet work and write somthing new just as good!

The complete story is the best I have ever read here! Thanks a lot for your hard work!!

Love the new Vanessa's position as a low street whore. I hope this is not the end, would love to read more humiliations that V. is supposed to take. }{

thanks for writing ... i,ve read this from the start and really enjoyed it .... 5 stars x

I have been following this story for a while and was pleased with the conclusion ggod job!