All Comments on 'Vanilla Melts'

Good maintenance of tension, if predictable. Sli is very real, good characterization. No distracting typos or solecisms. Chikara seems unreal, a cardboard character, too submissive to be interesting. What did Lowell see in her? Motivation, please.

Sorry, but this is whnny crap from the master who towers over the bf to the bf who has no clue what's going on.

Shes not a sub, she's just a selfish bitch who refuses to take responsibility for her choices and actions. He's not a Dom, he's just an arrogant creepy asshole.

I disagree. W / preview comment ..great story ....keep. writing! !!

This was a great story!! I would love to read more like this!! :) I myself left and went "Nilla" and some days wish I had not, but other days I am glad I did.. You cannot win, and you cannot get away.. You just have to make the best out of what you have.. But there is not a day that goes by I do not think about it and wonder what would be if i had not left..

I liked it good work!!! Have you ever thought about continuing the story??? Would be nice

This was very enjoyable. Please continue to do more.