All Comments on 'Vanilla with Cream'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
loved it

loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
goosebumps

those two words at the end gave me goosebumps!

perfect stories... I liked this "vanilla" series! the frustration, the build-up, the teasing, again the frustration, and finally the release... it was wonderful reading!

I'm about to go for a job interview, and this really relaxed me! I understood how the women felt... I've been "interrupted" before (by my gf) and playing it out like it was "planned" can be tough...but also wonderful :)

for the love of orgasms, please keep writing! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Delightful story

Deserves a "5" and wish these were the first 2 of a much longer series.

FreaknutFooFreaknutFooalmost 13 years ago
Not the same feeling as the first one

Although it was very erotic and hot, I spent most of the time reading just feeling bad for Mike. It could just be because I can relate to his situation, but Trish just seems like a bitch in this one. She killed the mood the rest of the story created. I dunno. Maybe it's just me.

richie78richie78almost 13 years ago
Hot story

Loved both parts of the story but I agree with the other poster that Trish did kill the mood slightly. THough that didn't stop me getting very hard reading it through

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
outstanding and veryh original

Love the story...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Not sure Trish needs to hide her feelings for Karen

Mike never once showed (with words or action) that he would lose trust in Trish just because she wants Karen too. Mike obviously wanted her to lick Karen's tits. She shouldn't lie to him. Solving that and becoming honest would make a great and sexy next part to the series!

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