by Archer2050
those two words at the end gave me goosebumps!
perfect stories... I liked this "vanilla" series! the frustration, the build-up, the teasing, again the frustration, and finally the release... it was wonderful reading!
I'm about to go for a job interview, and this really relaxed me! I understood how the women felt... I've been "interrupted" before (by my gf) and playing it out like it was "planned" can be tough...but also wonderful :)
for the love of orgasms, please keep writing! :)
Deserves a "5" and wish these were the first 2 of a much longer series.
Although it was very erotic and hot, I spent most of the time reading just feeling bad for Mike. It could just be because I can relate to his situation, but Trish just seems like a bitch in this one. She killed the mood the rest of the story created. I dunno. Maybe it's just me.
Loved both parts of the story but I agree with the other poster that Trish did kill the mood slightly. THough that didn't stop me getting very hard reading it through
Mike never once showed (with words or action) that he would lose trust in Trish just because she wants Karen too. Mike obviously wanted her to lick Karen's tits. She shouldn't lie to him. Solving that and becoming honest would make a great and sexy next part to the series!