All Comments on 'Vengeance of a Broken Heart Ch. 02'

Yet again another awesome story... I love the cliffhanger, but as a reader it sucks since I want to know what happens next. Can't wait until you write the next one.

Part one was better mainly because of its length, patient build up and lusher detail in description, but this is all constructive criticism because I absolutely loved the sequel as well - mainly because you hit all the right spots with the guy's fetishes and the heroines appearence. Please do upload another chapter soon

A fine piece of writing. Do some more please finish.

you are a jerk. loved it. this needs to be completed. thanks.

Should have put 230grains between her eyes. Problem solved! cleanup in aisle 4! NEXT! When will men learn? Lol

I liked it, please try and correct mistakes, mispellings etc., but otherwise a good read!

Thank you!

When I can see the Ch. 03? :-)

You must have continued this awesome story!

It's a pile of crap.