All Comments on 'Venus is a Star'

by Cristal_di_Canta

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SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangton12 months ago

Wow, so nice... I love the dialogue in this story, I love how you draw us in... And Dom even found his star at the end. Thank you Cristal for sharing...

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I'm a London based part-time girl who enjoys erotic writing especially when there is a strong element of romance, seduction or intrigue.