All Comments on 'Venus of Rimmel'

Over my head. Didn't feel there was anything erotic, much less Romantic, about this one.

First story!

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A strange but bewitching story. Some words and phrases are oddly wrong , for instance using “‘nothing peculiar” where a native speaker would say “nothing in particular.” Find a native speaking editor or proofreader and that will help. But keep writing. That also will help. Grazie.