All Comments on 'Veronica's Secret'

by Koba

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nestorb30nestorb30almost 3 years ago

Oh most excellent and the Two Pina Coladas was just perfectly delicious!

ontsurtontsurtalmost 3 years ago

Nice touch with the drinks :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Cheating whore... about to get justice, but this author will probably take it in a different direction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A literary and sexual masterpiece, as good as I've read here. 5 stars

messalinaromamessalinaromaalmost 3 years ago

this is a masterpiece from start to finish, a fine example of the way English should be written.

SubmissiveCelesteSubmissiveCelestealmost 3 years ago

Really well written and very believable. Well done. I enjoyed it tremendously.

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I live in Alaska. I am a Dominant. I enjoy writing erotic stories and poetry. Would love to read any and all feedback from anyone who reads my writings. Feel free to contact me!