by JamesSD
from page one:
"Holly moved between my legs and grasped my shaft with purpose. Her eyes remained fixed on my cock as she slowly pumped up and down it, getting a feel for its girth and length.
"I've had one this long before, but never so thick." She said,"
in the logic of the story, I think that's Nikki, right?
Otherwise, one fucking hot story. Loved it.
Well written, very human and sensative.
Love to see more
This story really portrays what it is like to have the
most common threesome, the one-night threesome. The heat, the passion, the initial shyness followed by an all out lustfest. It is a beautiful piece. Please continue to make more.
Strong story, very hot. The set up is so believable and natural. I love how the whole situation is actually thought out, there's actually a hesitation, or at least a moment of dilemma. The dialogue during the sex scene is a bit wooden, everyone is a little too up front, as if they are analyzing the situation rather than living it. Holly is a very hot character and I like how Nikki resists giving into her, but for my taste the who blowjob tip thing didn't seem natural. But a good story overall
very sexy, a nice one shot story. Keep writing and thanks.