All Comments on 'Vicki's Story Ch. 08'

Thank you for posting such an uplifting tale.

You've chosen a subject that is challenging for some and you've written about it sensitively and in many ways realistically.

It would be nice to learn more about Livvy and her parents in the future and also why Connie was such a bitch.

One of my very favourite stories here, so thanks once again.

There was a good rhythm in this story, thought you would carry it on further.

Another great story, it's hard in real life if you're trans or gay

so I thank you with all my heart for this story, you write amazingly, but I've said that before

As you wrote Vicki’s story I felt myself as a reader experience the change/emergence of your MC; that is, I felt myself change my perception of the character/how I identified/viewed the character as I read page to page. That did not happen overnight/like a switch rather as an emergence thanks to the way you crafted this story — a testimony to your creativity. And, yes, as a near hopeless romantic I was happy with ending and pleased to see Livvy accept herself. Maybe this closing piece wrapped up quite a few loose ends in quick order; sure you could have gone on and on but doing so would have detracted from/diminished the central theme — Vicki’s emergence/who she became in full bloom. Obviously I liked this story and your characters.

As you wrote Vicki’s story I felt myself as a reader experience the change/emergence of your MC; that is, I felt myself change my perception of the character/how I identified/viewed the character as I read page to page. That did not happen overnight/like a switch rather as an emergence thanks to the way you crafted this story — a testimony to your creativity. And, yes, as a near hopeless romantic I was happy with ending and pleased to see Livvy accept herself. Maybe this closing piece wrapped up quite a few loose ends in quick order; sure you could have gone on and on but doing so would have detracted from/diminished the central theme — Vicki’s emergence/who she became in full bloom. Obviously I liked this story and your characters.

A perfect ending and an awesome story. Thank you for telling it.

Lovely story,strong characters,well written,love your stories.

I have to be honest, I hated you, for all the times Vicky suffered and I felt alone like her, for all the times she suffered and I cried with her, for all the times she was loved and my heart it warmed together with his. For these reasons I have to thank you, your story touched my heart.

Well it's another great story. I loved it from beginning to end. You have a wonderful talent of drawing the reader in and I loved the ending

This is not a genre that I normally read, however your stories are always so good I read it and really enjoyed it, so real life and so believable. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

So not my thing. I read because I like the author’s work, but not this one.

This is a story I've liked from the start. This ending seemed a bit abrupt, at first, but hey, why drag it out. Connie got hers. Livvy seems to be coming to grips with herself. What would be point of dragging it out to answer a few points though? This didn't fall back to NZ as far as the previous chapter, so I can forgive the 'not sounding like Ohioans' when it happened here. All in all this was a pleasant diversion.

I am not sure if you are planning more chapters as this seemed like a nice close. In case it is the last I wanted to say what an impactful series this has been. I have enjoyed every chapter and this one has topped them all. Great job!

Wow... A happy ending.... I m.so happy they are together... Hope Lisa have a chance there as well...He he... But ya... Who cares...It's all about love.... Thanks for such a beautiful story...

Anaya Chandra..

It's a beautiful love story and the way Connie got taken down by her own actions is poetic but for me it's to bad that the assholes who assaulted Vicki didn't get there's but as always you always give us a great story to enjoy keep them coming mate

Just got around to finishing this series. Good job! I actually enjoy how you dive into some of the mundane stuff that happens day to day and not just fill the chapters with impossibly intense, continuous sex. Keep up the good work!