by Originsunknown
An unusual and erotic story. It may be difficult to craft follow on stories, but I will continue to look for them
I liked the story. Your writing style took a little bit for me to get used to but that's on me, not you; It's just not a style I'm used to reading. The story had a bit of an unusual plot, but I guess that's good because a person can get bored reading the same ol' story line time and time again. The best thing is that things turned out good for both of them. I hope things turned out OK for mom, too. I love brother/sister incest stories and yours was good.
Something I miss in some stories, too much sex and no love. Here in this story, despite too much sex, you did a good job getting the love story told.
5 stars...