All Comments on 'Video Booth Beginnings'

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Frankie1952Frankie195211 months ago

Another epic story. a fantastic read and so very sexy.

babaloo92babaloo9211 months ago

Good story. Interesting plot.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

An unusual and erotic story. It may be difficult to craft follow on stories, but I will continue to look for them

Mcur832Mcur83211 months ago

Really enjoyed this story

SSFguySSFguy11 months ago

I liked the story. Your writing style took a little bit for me to get used to but that's on me, not you; It's just not a style I'm used to reading. The story had a bit of an unusual plot, but I guess that's good because a person can get bored reading the same ol' story line time and time again. The best thing is that things turned out good for both of them. I hope things turned out OK for mom, too. I love brother/sister incest stories and yours was good.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Something I miss in some stories, too much sex and no love. Here in this story, despite too much sex, you did a good job getting the love story told.

5 stars...

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...

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