All Comments on 'Video Trends'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

The fun has just begun . . .

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

"No, big bro..." Does anyone outside of a bad after school special actually talk like that? I suspect not. Try reading your dialogue out loud... when you can do it without laughing at your own words, then you might have believable dialogue worked out.

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