All Comments on 'Vidi, Vici, Veni'

Cute sweet and very fulfilling. Not normally what one finds on an erotic story website. Very cleverly done.

THANK YOU for your imagination.

be Well and Happy,

Paul

Great stuff man

Well done. I especially like the wordplay of the title. Also the unexpected way Vicky seduced Nick.

I really hope there's a part 2 for this couple. 5*

It's really very rare for a surprise reveal to work on Lit, but this one at the competition fully got me. Kudos! Only accomplished writers can pull that off without it being cheesy. A very fine yarn you spun here. Five stars, of course!

Great story, loved the surprise pole dancer. Five stars.

Another excellent story that was actually a story and not just sex scenes with a stupid plot wrapped around them. Keep it up! 5/5

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WOW, I do hope you will Segway into chapter 2 soon! Thank you for another great story!

OK....All caught up now! Great story and I agree with others a chapter 2 would be greatly appreciated. You are on my follow list now so if you ever do find more you want to share about this couple I'll read about it! In the meantime maybe there is another couple you want to introduce us to? Just fantasizing!

Cheers

SAGE

I read this one a while back & wished I could find it again. Ta-da! Yea! What a great one. Loved it. Excellent display of your writing talents. Much appreciated.

Yet another masterpiece. You could do a sequel to any of these, they're that well imagined.

Great story! I realize that this was intended as a one off for a contest, but you really should think about continuing this story, it has the potential to go a long way. Please continue it.

More please, tell us what happens when they move. this sexy tale really needs more.