All Comments on 'Vietnamese Wife Opens Up Pt. 15'

If Tim is like that now then I'm not sure about this relationship. But then, you are the author so you can take them wherever you want.

Anne

Please incorporate Rimming. With 2 wives at home, Thuy could eat ass while Ha sucked cock.

the story was perfect. i am looking forward to reading more. i would like for kim to continue. would rate a 10 if i could.

P&B thanks for the kind words.

Too many grammar errors and too much detail about using water pick, work stuff, etc. This is a porn site not Harlequin romance. We don't care about servers, computer issues, what you had for dinner, mouthwash, etc. This story could have been done in half as many chapters without all the mundane carp.

Waaaay too much superfluous details. Plus why do you have to make us read how tall you are and how much you weigh at the first of EVERY chapter.