All Comments on 'Vignettes'

I voted too.

i love your storys, that numbers on the clock was extremely sad. keep up the good work though :D

Brilliant vignettes. You covered a great deal of the hopes and fears involved not just in D/s, but in all human relationships. Thanks you.

I really loved the vignettes - they were thought provoking, intriguing, and left me wanting for more. Might they at some point expanded to full length stories?

You're an extremely good writer, able to convey heavy emotion in such a small amount of time! I loved these, you should write more.

Those were amazing, especially the last one. There was something about it that almost brought me to tears. You convey such honest emotion in each piece here. Beautiful, beautiful words. Thank you.

I should have read this ages ago, I always glance at the title and think another time. Silly me. The cucumber is such a clever little short story. And the reference question was brilliant - I could pratically taste her nervousness. I'd be surprised to find a person not moved by the worn collar. Since those three are all BDSM themed it really makes me wonder about the one with the knife, but I am reluctant to read too much into it so will rather just take it on face value. Brilliant work. Thank you.

great job. onto the favs list you go.

Your writing has such a strong voice. Keep it up!

You did an amazing job building 4 short stories out of 12 phrases. I liked the last one best.

This was a great idea, done very well.