All Comments on 'Vilja and Nadine'

I tend to really like a lot of your stories, but being honest this was a bit of a lackluster affair here.

The premise was fine and had a lot of potential, but the whole thing kinda felt like you weren't all that invested and just went through the motions a bit here.

There wasn't any appreciable character development, world building, story telling or interesting erotic scenes.

You've got to tick at least one of those boxes and you usually manage to do so quite well.

What went wrong here?

Gentle, intelligent and beautifully written as always - Thank you Mr O

Thanks so much for such a fun fantasy read. A gentle and soothing and relaxing tale. Very well done. KUDOS

this fun romp. It was very enjoyable to read. Yes, it could have been longer, with more character development and a more detailed setting, but I enjoyed it for what it is. 5* from me.

Thank you for writing it, and thank you for sharing your work.