All Comments on 'Vince and Jess'

got say it was a hot story,hope you do more

Well written and very hot! Let's have some more.

You need to stop using the grade school dropout level grammer. The long "............" and "aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh" kill the thought contained in the story.

I can't wait to hear more of your adventures.

While the story had some promise, the grammar was lousy and the punctuation, especially the '........', just stunk up the whole works.<p>Also, I'm not saying it's not a true story, but I didn't buy the whole clueless-hubby-last-minute-cancellation setup.<p>Get an editor. You need one in the worst way.

Jess needed to experience his shooting in her belly so she could experience pregnancy as well.

True Story or not, it got me off. LOL

I Believe that the critics on here need to remember

that this is NOT a site meant for just professionals.

Louise it sounds as if you are just the type of person

I would adore sharing "adventures" with :)

Keep it Up Babes,

Liane