All Comments on 'Violet in the 'stretcher''

I hope you write part 2 and find out what happened to violet.

very good, but the ending.

it is too mutch poor ...

In several instances you refer to the way Violet felt in this story. As a person watching a video, unless she says she feels a certain way, none of us know what Violet feels emotionally or physically. She may be a bondage actress and was completely thrilled by the whole experience. Instead of a narrative from your point of view, you would have to write the story from what I believe is called third person point of view. Technical nit-pick perhaps. But in doing so you can truly express all the feelings and emotions your characters are experiencing. Please keep that in mind as you write more stories in the future. I hope this doesn't discourage you from writing more as I enjoyed reading this story.