by jiroo
Get real, a 13 inch cock? and how would she know it a perfect cock as she is a virgin and never even saw one before. her brother is an asshole, she never sucked cock before he should have explained it to her and glide her and not tell her how bad she was at it,he did not care about her feelings and to top it off he just rammed as much of his cock in her not caring a rats ass about her. he should have let her on top and let her lower herself at her own pace and let her get used to it,but no, he made her first time the worst sex ever,he only cared about getting his own nut off with no regard for his sister.
Not bad writing but if this is what you have for stories, I wouldn't bother with a second one.
Very disappointing story line going from having never seen porn to then say from the limited porn she had watched. The potential existed for this to be a good quick read story
I don't know anyone so callus as this guy is made out to be. There's no indication why he would be this way towards a younger sibling.