by Oupa99
This is my favorite part in the whole story. It's so creative and Unique. Just like your writing ideas are. Its a pleasure reading them. :)
Really loved the story, hell the whole druid thing makes me want to become one! Well of I wasnt catholic anyway! Really great story but think it missed a bit by not having a bit more of a conclusion with the whole kidnapping point. I understand the satanic priest said they'll stop but it felt like there was more to go with that part of the story. The story didn't suffer because of it just felt that part needed some more to put it to bed.
Loved the story until the wedding vows, those vows didn’t fit their relationship at all and felt jarringly out of place.