All Comments on 'Virginal Thesis'

Excellent piece. Don't hesitate to make it a little longer, like adding a "gettng-to-know-each-other" part between entering the apartment and going into the bedroom. Yes, if you could learn to stretch the story out, you could write romance novels.

Let's hope this will lnot be a one night stand, but based on the longevity of the evening before the conclusion of the story I hope not.

He may have unleashed a tiger and found someone worthwhile.

I liked the description of the union from both of their perspectives. I got then feeling from two –people- without the cliché coercing or submissive tearing. Best of all the fantasy took me there.

Can’t wait to read more.

amazing writing.