by Wislogger
Great build up of characters. And good descriptions of the curiosity and concerns of the two virgins. Too bad they didn't think about all those condoms they brought.
I enjoyed it. It reminded me of the time I first joined with a girl at college, although that was a bit more frenzied, out in the middle of the campus practice football field. First times are always magic, both in real and in the literature. My first lover panted and kept repeating "I want it, Jim. Give it to me. Give it to me, I want it,
Jim". brought back sweet memories. Good story.