by AchtungNight
I loved this video game, and you twisted the story in a very good way. Loved It!
to the chain, Achtung. Fly is a favorite of mine, and I'm happy to see so many contributing writers. I don't know anything about the game you use for your story, nor do I know much about you. But I do know that this a good read, and it makes for a good read even to someone who doesn't know the game on which it's based. It's far-fetched, as it's supposed to be, and you did it quite well.
Ever since the sceen with meryl in the bathroom and Sniper Wolf I always fantazised abouth those two women. Now they are here and I can enjoy their company. Thx!!
I'm not familiar with the game itself, other than the title and premise, but you made that fact not matter. Very well written, not to mention HOT. Great job! ~Minx
But I had to send the wee ones to bed first. VERY hot read, Achtung. :D I can't wait to see what goes up next!
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I love Sniper Wolf and Meryl! Snake's a lucky guy in this story! ;)
I enjoyed reading this and loved how you followed the plot of the first game. A little more description in the sex scenes could make it better, but I really like it overall. Give us more!
really good story, i enjoyed it a lot, my only thought, if the charecter plans on teaming with Wolf and Raven, won't FoxDie just end up killing them?
I know it's been a while, but I will answer the last comment now. Don't forget the character has Naomi Hunter on his side. She can disable FoxDie. Maybe. :) Thx for reading. -AN