by TheRealDealer
Fascinating story, really interesting and well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter in Beth's life.
Interesting storey, not really my scene, but still quite enjoyed it, mainly because it’s so well written, I am looking forward to discover what is in store for Beth in the next chapter, I hope for her sake, her new master is kind. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Nice story. It was fairly obvious who her owner was but the method of discovery really worked well. And the concept of that kind of training is insidious and fascinating. Thanks for a great start and hope to see it continue
I thought it was great - well written and very imaginative. The detail on her training was very good and liked the virtual reality headset idea.