All Comments on 'Virtual Slavery Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

"contended feeling"

Really

88girfriend88girfriend11 months ago

Very well done. I really liked the slave ai in her head.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I thought it was great - well written and very imaginative. The detail on her training was very good and liked the virtual reality headset idea.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Nice story. It was fairly obvious who her owner was but the method of discovery really worked well. And the concept of that kind of training is insidious and fascinating. Thanks for a great start and hope to see it continue

RedrossesRedrosses12 months ago

Can’t wait for more

WoodencavWoodencavabout 1 year ago

Interesting storey, not really my scene, but still quite enjoyed it, mainly because it’s so well written, I am looking forward to discover what is in store for Beth in the next chapter, I hope for her sake, her new master is kind. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

LyraLysetteLyraLysetteabout 1 year ago

I loved it and am eagerly anticipating the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Interesting tech control take on the universe.

GortmundyGortmundyabout 1 year ago

Fascinating story, really interesting and well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter in Beth's life.

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