All Comments on 'Visa Violation'

What will happen for Christie and Oliver?

Today's story over in Loving Wives was OK, so I was worried you had gained a conscience. But, alas here you are sodomising young men again. At least this one agreed to it. One Star.

Too bad. Only had to skim for a second before 1 bombing.

Apparently you wish to insult and frustrate your readers too.

Another good one, this author has his own genre, weird and super disgusting kink, but so so so funny.

Actually a good read the kept me at it until the end.

5*

But what happened to them after?

This is a great read. Well laid out and believable from start to... well two hands really sttrrettchched it for me! Funny though 'in the end'.

The comments only highlight how flawed the point system is. People that don't like certain genres should not read them, but that's their business I suppose. Yet, when we let them judge our work, we are letting their inhibitions mark us in the rating system.

I gave it the 5 that it deserved for top writing, top imagination, top believe-ability, story structure, character building, detailed descriptions.

Now that is just my critical opinion.

Way too long, too much extra nonsense.

I skimmed it to get to the good parts.

Page 4 was my favorite.

Good flow when you actually got to the good stuff.